LazyBucks's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Night Vision Reminisce]

Hmmmmmmmmmm..........

I think a bit of clarification on who did what would be nice but I guess I will write this review blind for the time being.
The piano is very nice and well written. I like the dull sound to it, its EQ'd just perfectly.

The strings were nice but a little dull, maybe EQ them a bit to make them brighter.

Overall its a nice piece, could use some more EQ work and a little bit of a better mix but its cool.
Good job you two.
4/5

Mawnz responds:

geniebmusic:
"Yay! Thank you for listening and commenting! Honestly, both of us did a little bit of everything together haha, so it wasn't just one person did piano or one person did percussion. :) We will work harder in the future for sure. Again, thank you!"

Mawnz:
"I also did most(if not all) the EQ and mixing stuff so thank you for the feedback! :)"

[Totally a Town Theme]

The drums felt somewhat out of place, almost too rigid, but it was nice and maybe with some more work it will improve.

The piano and other melodic instruments are really nice, the flutes give off a very sweet feeling.

I enjoyed this, keep working at it :)
3.5/5

Wilhiemthe2nd responds:

Thanks a lot for the review!

With that in mind, i do think i could change some stuff with the Drums.
Personally now, i think the snares need to relax, and be replaced with a lighter sound. That might fit better right? :)

[Dropped]

I found the mix to be quite muddy, especially with mid frequencies.
The vocals were out of tune and didn't particularly suit the music, also some of the instruments were not mixed in very well and could be quite dominating in the mix.

Putting aside that I really like the composition and the tone of the piece. Its got a really nice vibe to it this song.
But again there are quite a few issues with this, with re-recorded vocals and a better mix this could be a really cool song.

3/5 for me but no denying this is a very strong composition with some awesome ideas in it.

SourJovis responds:

Thank you for your feedback. This is not a polished song. I couldn't finish it because I never received all of the vocal tracks. It's mixed a long time ago when I knew less about how to do it, etc, etc. But I like it because of its flaws. This is just how it turned out. This is how I know it. Everything has a cause and a reason why it is the way it is. So to me this is how it is supposed to be. I won't make another mix of this song. I do get what you mean though, and why you don't appreciate the quirkiness as much as I do. I like the melody and the chords too. It would be interesting to start over and make a cleaner version of the song. Now I have more experience, and where less things go wrong with the production (I hope). I will make it significantly different though, so it won't spoil the original for me. No vocals. Different build up probably. Sometimes different instruments. I'll see about that. Could be fun.

[Free Atmosphere]

Its nice but it belongs in Ambient not cinematic. Although it may be used for a film or such that doesn't define it as cinematic, this is definitely a ambient piece.

Good job though

DESHIEL responds:

good to know ;)

[Cubix Skyland]

I really enjoyed this, nice feel to it.
The guitars are very cool, would definitely work as a passive tune in the back while you are walking around a town or hub area.
Nice job.

geniebmusic responds:

Yay! Thank you :D

[Coded]

Scouted, lovely piece.
Look forward to some more piano pieces from you, possibly a piano collab in future?
Good job.

geniebmusic responds:

Hi! Thank you so much for listening <3
I will work hard on my future piano pieces. I am still new to piano composition to be honest xD I am definitely open to a piano collab in the future though :)

Again, thank you!

[Lost in Wander]

Why are you so bad?

0 / 100

stunkel responds:

sorry :(