Just before I start, I really don't like this kind of rap.
The kind with a story and its full of supposed emotion and all that, yeah, yeah.
I'm not being rude, I just really don't like it. Maybe its my European look on it, but I just don't get it or like the genre.
But anyway, on to your song.
Putting aside my dislike of the type of music and rap, its very well made, and I appreciate that.
The mix is tight, everything is clean and where it needs to be, which is rare on Newgrounds, so massive props to Ebon Hawk for the beat and you guys for keeping your vocals in line.
The flow is awesome, moves nicely and has great energy behind it. It always feels like its building up to something and that excitement is maintained the whole way throughout.
So all in all I'm going to give this a 4.5/5, and vote 5 on it.
5/5 for the mixing
5/5 for the rapping and lyrics
But I gotta lose 0.5 on it simply because I don't like the style of music, but still guys, really great job and keep it up for sure!